This morning I continously re-drafted the Peppa Pig section of my report. I took out any bits of information which I felt were not 100% relevant to the review title, and paired up pieces of information which I felt had more power together etc.
The current word count is 1800. I sent this over to my course leader so that we could assess which bits could be eliminated etc. I also sent the new and improved version over to the Wiser advisor. I asked her to read the review from a stance where she could assess whether certain bits of information should not be included.
I will await the above replies whilst I continue drafting my The Simpsons section.
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